I am Leilani

I am Leilani. I'm living in my hometown in China. I am also a student in  the at Northwest Normal University. My major is the Music Education, but I really don't want to be a teacher.And I love music so much！All kinds of music！So，if you are agree with me .You just call me at once.I have a lot of passion want to talk with you！Thank you so much again！See you soon！

in the --  In my area, people use 'in the" but it isn't professionally used. You didn't need to use "the" this time. 

have a lot of passion -- "want" is all you need but you could have said something like this "I am passionate about talking with new people." That's if you really wanted to use the word passion.

I hope this helps! :)

I Am Leilani

I am Leilani.I living live in China, my hometown.I am also a student in at the Northwest Normal University.My major is the Music Education, but I really don't want to be a teacher.And I love music so much！I love all kinds of music, so if you are agree with me, you just call me at once. I am excited to have a lot of passion  talk with you！Thank u you so much again！See u you soon！