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First time at the Zoo
Hi, guys! I Wish for good luck to everyone with learning languages! i would Will appreciate it if somebody could correct my mistakes in this text (my homework):
First time Wendy was at the Zoo was when she was 10. She lived in a small provincial town with two schools, 1 library, a few big shops, and a monument of the famous writer of 19th century near the railway station and mystery forest, where she was very fond of walking with her best friend Kelly. She saw some animals in the forest: a squirrel was jumping from branch to branch, and a mole showed his face then disappeared within the land.
In the august Wendy’s older sister came to visit her parent’s house. She decided to take Wandy to the city where she was university student – it was the capital of the country. So Wandy started to preparing to of the biggest trip in of her life. She knew that in that city there was a Zoo, and she asked her sister to get her there.
At the that day, when they both were full of happiness and wishful thinking got out from home on the way to the Zoo, weather had been getting really bad. Is it became raining rainy and cold. The Zoo was on the in Iceland so they were getting their there on the by ship. Wandy was thinking, how would animals spend their time when the weather was so bad? Maybe they were guesting keeping each other company??
But when the ship flown got to the coast, the sun had looked out come back again. Wandy made a step her way to the big beautiful plate with pictures of an elephant, sunny-colored lion and even a black dangerous cat called a “panther”…
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