Bad cold

I have had a cold since last week. I have little appetite and don't feel well.
But I had three pieces of cake after work. When I saw the cakes, I was excited. Wow! I'm much better now. Eating cakes made me feel better.

Hello Mai,

Another nice text, just a few small corrections.

1. The cold started last week and continues up to now so we use the present perfect with 'since'. If you haven't done the present perfect before messageme and I will explain it to you.

2. We use 'the'to describe the cakes as we talked about them for the first time in the previous sentence so they are now a concrete idea.

I'm glad you feel better now!

Bad cold

I have a cold from last week. I have little appetite and don't feel well.
But I had three pieces of cake left from work. When I saw the cake, I was excited. Wow! I'm quite fine. Eating cake made me feel better.