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Families in the past. Spain. Would you like correct this for me, please? Nowadays the families is suffering some changes is their shapes and values, at least in my country. Families in the past used to be bigger than now, they consisted of two or three generations wich live together in the same home. I mean, Nuclear Family was composed of many children ,parents ,cousins ,aunts ... Families were a place where the children learned several values as repect, honesty, sincere , even the way to eat, or the way to communication and relatioships between all members of familiar group even yo could listen please and thanks almost everything. The grandparents used to be a good position and they were respect by their grandsons . In general the families was involved by a Religion, for example my parents believe in Catolohic Religion, and also were joined.

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Families in the past. Spain. Would you like correct this for me, please?

 

Nowadays the families are suffering some changes in their shapes and values, at least in my country.

Families in the past used to be bigger than they are now. They consisted of two or three generations which lived together in the same home (or under the same roof). I mean, Nuclear Family was composed of many children, parents, cousins, and aunts.

Families were the place where the children learned several values such as; repect, honesty, sincerety, even the way to eat. The way to communicate and relatioships between all the members of a familiar group you would even hear please and thank you for almost everything. (?)

The grandparents used to be an important position, and they were respect by their grandsons. 

In general the families were involved in a Religion. For example my parents are Catholics, and we were raised as Catholics.



Good job!!

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Families in the past. Spain. Would you like correct this for me, please?

 

Nowadays the families is are suffering some changes is in their shapes (Maybe sizes would be a better word)  and values, at least in my country.

Families in the past used to be bigger than now, they consisted of two or three generations which lived together in the same home. I mean, The nuclear family was composed of many relatives, such as, parents, cousins and aunts. 

Families were a place where the children learned several values as repect, honesty, sincere , even the way to eat, or the way to communication and relatioships between all members of familiar group even yo could listen please and thanks almost everything.

 

Note: Since families are not techinically a place I have reworded this paragraph and pasted it below to make it more grammaitcally correct.

 

Children used to learn several values from their families, such as: Respect, honesty and sincerity. Children even learned how to eat and communicate from their families. You could always hear family members say 'please' and 'thank you' to each other. 


The grandparents used to be a good position and they were respected by their grandsons.

In general, the families was were involved in a religion. For example, my parents believe in the Catholic religion, and also were are joined.

 

 Great job Tonia! 


There were just a few minor mistakes in this... One thing I noticed what using listen/hear.  In Spanish these words are used interchangably but in English one listens to music or adivce and one hears sounds or someone saying something. I would just suggest reviewing the different uses of listen and hear. 


Also, keep practicing past tense verb conjugations... especially with was and were (or is and are in the present tense).


Keep up the good work!


-Chloe

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Families in the past. Spain. Would you like correct this for me, please?

Nowadays the families is(are) suffering some changes is(in) their shapes and values, at least in my country 

Families in the past are bigger than now, they consist of two or three generations wich live together in the same home. I mean, Nuclear Family was composed of many children ,parents ,cousins ,aunts ...

From joint Families , a place where the children learned several values such as repect, honesty, sincere , even the way to eat, or the way to communication and relatioships between all members of familiar group even yo could listen please and thanks almost everything.

The grandparents used to be a good position and they were  respected by their grandsons .

In general the families were involved by a Religion, for example my parents believes in Catolohic Religion, and also were joined.

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