Hi everybody! Can you check my homework on English homework? Thanks! =)

Why I'm learning English
I am learning English because I very like to travel very much. Because of this I'm learning English. I hope that once one day, I will will be able to see the whole all world. I am trying to learn 20 new words every day and then use them their when I speak. From the beginning, I have been very hesitant when I spoke. I used a program called Hello Talk. I met a few of people who helped me. We spoke for 10 minutes in Russian and then for speak 10 minutes in English. I watched a movie entitled "Alice in Wonderland". I tried to understand everything, but it was hard. I readed with the subtitles. I want to bring about realize my dream. I want to make a the difference in my life. I devote all my free time to learning English. Yes, I experience a setbacks sometimes. and because of this I lose motivation. I understand that I need to make put in an incredible amount of effort work for my English, . but I will overcome it this. I am very happy that I may be able to speak in English. I do not Never mind that I makinge many mistakes. as I'm getting experience. I try to surround myself me only with English-speaking people. Yes, sometimes I feel a sense of self-doubt, but I assume I am going in the right direction go in right towards. I want to find a way to succeed. I don't know why I never liked English before Used to I didn't love English. I don't know why =) Occasionally I watch a different podcasts. In the future I want to read books. I will buy Harry Potter. I guess when I read this series of books book I will learn many know very new words. I am a beginner simple begginer. I am thankful to everyone who helps me. =)

Why I'm learning English 

I very like to travel. 

Because of this, I'm learning English.

I hope that once I have mastered English, I will be able to see all the world.

I try to learn 20 new words every day and then use their them when I speak.

At the beginning I was very hesitant to speak. 

I use a program "Hello Talk".

I met a few of people who helped me.

We speak 10 min of Russian and then speak 10 min of English.

I watched the movie "Alice in Wonderland".

I tried to understand, but it was hard.

I readed (watched?) it with subtitles.

I want to bring about accomplish my dream.

I want to make the a difference in my life.

I devote all my free time to learn English.

Yes, I experience a setbacks sometimes.

And because of this, I lose motivation.

I understand that I need to make incredible work hard for my English.

But I will overcome this.

I am very happy that I may(can? may is a modal which means asking for permission) speak in English.

Never mind that It is ok that I make many mistakes.

I'm getting experience.

I try to surround me myself with only English people who speaks English.

Yes, sometimes I feel experience self doubt.

But I assume I go in right towards. (But I know I am going in the right direction?)

I want to find a way to success.

Used to I used to not like didn't love English.

I don't know why (I have changed) =)

Occasionally I watch a different podcasts. (podcast are listened to?)

In the future, I want to read books.

I will buy "Harry Potter".

I guess when I read this the book, I will get to know very many new words.

I am a simple begginer beginner.

Thank you to everybody who helps (helped?) me. =)

Why I'm learning English

I very really like to travel. Because of this, I'm learning English. I hope that once soon I will see all world. I try to learn 20 new words every day, and then use their them when I speak. From the beginning I very hesitated when I speak spoke. I use a program called Hello Talk. I met a few of people who helps helped me. We speak 10 min on in Russian and then speak 10 min on in English. I watched the movie "alice in wonderland Alice in Wonderland". I tried to understand it, but it was hard. I readed watched it with subtitles. I want to bring about my dream. I want to make the a difference in my life. I devote all my free time to learn learning English. Yes, I experience a setback setbacks sometimes. And Because of this I lose motivation. I understand that need to make incredible effort to work for on my English. But, I will overcome this. I am very happy that I may speak on in English. Never mind that I make many mistakes. I'm getting experience. I try to surround me only myself with English people. Yes, sometimes I feel self doubt. But I assume I go in am going the right towards way. I want to find a way to success  succeed. Used to I didn't I used to not love English. I don't know why =) Occasionally, I watch a different podcasts. In the future, I want to read books. I will buy Harry Potter. I guess when I read this book, I will know very many new words. I am a simple begginer beginner. Thank you to everybody who helps me. =)

Not bad Roman, you actully did a very nice job on this entry, the only thing I noticed was your tenses were a little off is all, and you had a few minor grammar mistakes. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask!

Hi everybody! Can you check my homework on English? Thanks! =)

Why I'm learning English
I really love to travel. Because of this, I'm learning English. I hope that once I will see all world. I try to learn 20 new words every day and then use their when I speak. From the beginning I was very hesitated when I speak. I use a program called, "Hello Talk." I met a few people who woild help me. We'd speak 10 min on Russian and then speak 10 min on English. I watched movie "Alice in Wonderland." I tried to understand, but it was hard. I watched it with subtitles. I want to bring about my dream. I want to make a difference in my life. I devote all my free time to learn English. Yes, I experience a setback sometimes. And because of this, I lose motivation. I understand that need to make incredible work for my English. But I will overcome this. I very happy that I may speak on English. Never mind that I make many mistakes. I'm getting experience. I try to surround me only English people. Yes, sometimes I feel self doubt. But I assume I go in right towards. I want to find a way to success. Used to I didn't love English. I don't know why =) Occasionally, I watch a different podcasts. In the future I want to read books. I will buy Harry Potter. I guess when I read this book I will know very new words. I am a simple begginer. Thank you to everybody who helps me. =)