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Did you see the MSL? Today was fantastic. That's because SKT which is LOL game team, took a victory two time in today's MSI. In First match, SKT played with Fnatic which is EU team. The match was close game, nobody predicted the game winner. but Bang, who is one dealer in SKT team, made a penta kill and made a game victory. Next match, SKT took on AHQ, which is East Asia team. I thougth SKT will take victory easily but it wasn't AHQ leaded the game from beginning to end, So most of fans thought AHQ made the extraordinary event in MSL. but It wasn't become. SKT turned the game around though stealing Baron and combat Eventually, SKT win the game.. I was so exciting during the two match.. I'm looking foward to next match which will be tomorrow with Fnatic ..

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Did you see the MSL?

Today was fantastic. That's because SKT which is LOL game team, took a victory two times in today's MSI.

In the (F)first match, SKT played with Fnatic which is an EU team.
The match was a close game,    (nobody) no one predicted the game winner(.), but Bang, who is one dealer in SKT team, made a penta kill and (made) a game victory.
In the (N) next match, SKT took on AHQ, which is an East Asian team. I (thougth) thought  SKT ( will) would  take the victory easily, but (it wasn't) they did'nt.
AHQ (leaded) led the game from beginning to end,.( So  m)Most of  the fans thought AHQ made (the) an extraordinary event  in MSL (.), but (It wasn't become) that did not happen.
SKT turned the game around (though) through stealing Baron and combat .
Eventually, SKT (win) won the game. I was so (exciting) excited during the two (match) matches.
I'm looking foward to the next match which will be tomorrow with Fnatic .

 

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