二0一五年四月八日：阳朔的自记

你们好朋友们！

我今天在中国的南方写给你们。

我一直以来很喜欢中国。但这儿的天气不太好（现在这里经常下雨）不过风景是非常漂亮！

自先中国人和和英国人不太一样，不过我很喜欢他们。我们已经试过很多很好吃的中餐。我最爱的菜是饺子！

明天我们打算坐飞机去昆明！

下次见！

亚瑟 

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8/5/2015 － Yangshuo journal entry

Hello friends!

I am write to you today from Southern China .

So far I really like China. The weather is not very good ( there's a lot of rain right now ) but the scenery is very beautiful!

At first, Chinese people seem very different from English people but I really like them .

We have tried lots of delicious Chinese food. My favorite dish is dumplings!

Tomorrow we plan to fly to Kunming.

See you next time!

Arthur

二0一五年四月八日：阳朔的日记

你们好朋友们！

我今天在中国的南方写给你们。

我到目前为止很喜欢中国。在这儿的天气不太好（总是下雨）不过风景非常漂亮！(或： 风景是非常漂亮的） 

首先中国人比英国人不一样，不过我很喜欢他们。我们已经吃过佷多很好吃的中餐。我最爱的菜是饺子！

明天我们打算坐飞机去昆明！

下次见！

亚瑟 

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8/5/2015 － Yangshuo journal entry

Hello friends!

I am write to you today from Southern China .

So far I really like China. The weather is not very good ( there's a lot of rain right now ) but the scenery is very beautiful!

At first, Chinese people seem very different from English people but I really like them .

We have tried lots of delicious Chinese food. My favorite dish is dumplings!

Tomorrow we plan to fly to Kunming.

See you next time!

Arthur

二0一五年四月八日：阳朔的自记

你们好朋友们！

我今天在中国的南方写你们。

a preposition is needed here, we use"写给你们" instead of "写你们" which means"write something about you".

我到现在很喜欢中国。在这儿的天气不太好（正在有很多下雨）不过风景是非常漂亮！

the verb"下"should be got rid of, ”很多雨“is good.you can also say"现在经常下雨" which is used more often .

自先中国人比英国人不像一样，不过我很喜欢他们。我们已经完过佷多很好吃的中餐。我最爱的菜是饺子！

"比"is “compared with”, you can say "跟英国人相比，中国人很不一样"which means "compared with english people,chinese people seem very different. " or you can replace "比" with"和" and say"中国人和英国人不像"which means"Chinese people are different from English people"。

"像"and “一样” have the same meanings, one of them is enough here. 
if you want to be more percific like what you do in your english version. you can say"中国人和英国人貌似很不一样".

“貌似”is“seem”，there are some other words like "似乎"“好像” which also mean "seem".

"很" means"very",similar words are "特别"“非常”. you can also use"巨" which is an informal word . if you say"A和B巨像"with a stress on the word"巨"，your chinese friend will be like"wow, he is so humorous even in a second language". but "巨 "is not suggested for formal conditions.

明天我们打算坐飞机去昆明！

this sentence is perfect. no change is needed. "打算"is exactly the word we use when we want to express"plan to".
亚瑟 

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8/5/2015 － Yangshuo journal entry

Hello friends!

I am write to you today from Southern China .

So far I really like China. The weather is not very good ( there's a lot of rain right now ) but the scenery is very beautiful!

At first, Chinese people seem very different from English people but I really like them .

We have tried lots of delicious Chinese food. My favorite dish is dumplings!

Tomorrow we plan to fly to Kunming.

See you next time!

Arthur