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Holiday
The word for 'Holiday' in my country means language is "Liburan". It is the a day when people rest and relax. For Some people, they spend their holiday to visiting relatives, friends, or colleagues. For the others, they spend it by just staying at home, reading a novel, watching movies, or listening to music. Somehow, whatever you do, you need to think that the farthest most unreachable/unchangeable? thing in the world is the past. So dont spend your time with the doing things you would may regret in the future.
Please correct my writing :)
I really appreciate it.
Holiday
Holiday in my country means "Liburan". It is the a day when people rest and relax. For some people, they spend their holiday to visiting relatives, friends, or colleagues. For the others, they spend it by just staying at home, reading a novel, watching movies, or listening to musics. Somehow, whatever you do, you need to think that the farthest thing in the world is the past. So don't spend your time with the things you would regret in the future.
Please correct my writing :)
I really appreciate it.
It is the day = a specific day of which there is only one
It is a day = one day of possibly many
Holiday
In my country, "holiday" means "Liburan"*. It is the day when people rest and relax. For some people, they spend their* holiday to visit relatives, friends, or colleagues. For others, they spend it just by staying at home, reading a novel, watching movies, or listening to music. Somehow, whatever you do, you need to think that the farthest thing in the world is the past. So don't spend your time with the things you would regret in the future.
Please correct my writing :)
I really appreciate it.
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