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Tomorrow Is Constitution Day Tomorrow is the holiday which is Constitution day. Every year before this day, we have been discussing about if changing our constitution. But it hasn't happened for 70 years, and it has some grammatical errors, because it was made by US after World War Two. Actually, no congresswomen(men) have brave to change it bcz nobody has done. On the other side, we have really great one which is about peace. We don't have, make and be brought in any nuclear weapons. We still not have answer, but our hope is all for peace.

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Tomorrow Is Constitution Day

Tomorrow is the a holiday, it's which is Constitution day. Every year before this day, we have been discussing about if changing our constitution. But it hasn't happened for 70 years, and it contains has some grammatical errors, because it was made by the  US after World War Two.
Actually, no congresswomen(men) have been brave enough to change it bcz nobody has done. On the other hand side, we have a  really great one which is about peace. We don't have, make or buy and be brought in any nuclear weapons. We still do not have the answer, but our hope is all for peace for all.

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Tomorrow Is Constitution Day

Tomorrow is the holiday which is Constitution day. Every year before this day, we have been discussing about if we will change changing our constitution. But it hasn't happened for 70 years, and it has some grammatical errors, because it was made by the US after World War Two.
Actually, no congresswomen(men) have been brave enough to change it bcz nobody has done. On the other side, we have really great one which is about peace. We don't have, make and or are be brought in any nuclear weapons. We still do not have an answer, but our hope is all for peace for all.

 

Your English is very good! Easily understandable. Keep it up! :D

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your speak so nice in my country no one belive in change only speak on it ....i wish the peace for all world

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