Nice to see him again.

My Japanese friend came to Taiwan last night. This is the second time that he visit[ed] Taiwan. At [T]he first time [he came,] we went to NingXia Night Market、Ximending and Taipei Station Front Metro Mall[;] it was a wonderful time! I bought some souvenirs for him and his family. This time[,] he [brought] [me] souvenir[s]－Hokkaido-made special milk cookies for me. I [was] surprised and happy! We are looking forward to [this] trip because we have many places [we] want to go. I hope he has a good memory [from this] trip.

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Good work!  Remember the space after the period or exclamation point. Also pay attention to tenses. Very understandable!