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Hi :) Hi everyone ! My name is Anna, I'm 14 years old and I live in France. I'm new here so I'm a little bit shy... I really love languages ! I started learning English 4 years ago at school. I like to watch movies in English, read English books or listen to English music. It helps me a lot ! At school I'm also learning Spanish and Latin and in my spare time I'm teaching myself Japanese. I think Japanese is a very beautiful language, but it's hard :( I like learning about the cultures of other countries. I like to draw and play the piano. I like doing anything artistic in general because I can express my feelings. Well, I don't know what to say anymore... Bye ! :)

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Hi :)

Hi everyone ! My name is Anna, I'm 14 years old and I live in France. I'm new here so I'm a little bit shy...
I really love languages !
I started learning English 4 years ago at school. I like to watch movies in English, read English books or and listen to English music. It helps me a lot ! At school I'm also learning Spanish and Latin and in my spare time I'm teaching myself Japanese. I think Japanese is a very beautiful language, but it's hard :(
I like learning about the cultures of other countries.
I like to draw and play the piano. I like doing anything artistic in general because I can express my feelings.
Well, I don't know what to say anymore... else to say...
Bye ! :)

 

Anna, your entry is pretty much perfect!  The only suggestions I have are marked in red.  Welcome to italki and I hope you enjoy your journey here!

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Hi Anna! Your English is very impressive! I'm a 15 year old girl that lives in England and I am also learning Japanese! I learn French and German at school as well so I would love it if we could become friends and message each other.
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Hello Anna! I am new here, too.And I am 14 too.I am a Chinese and I love Frence very much.Could we make friends?
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Oh I didn't know that. In France we always put a gap before and after !, ?, : Thank you!
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Hi Anna, Firstly congratulations on a very well written note - it is perfect! Well done. My only comment is a very small one. When writing in English, we tend to not put a gap between a word and an ! (exclamation mark). So instead of: I really love languages ! You should write: I really love languages! This is a very small point, but will hopefully help you when writing in English! David.

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