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Robbery near my home Today, a lot of people near my house stood in a huddle to see polices for catching robberies. While I'm learning English, I suddenly was noticed by raised voice outside my house. I imagined that having a fight based on that voice. In Vietnam, although most people like to see that, but I feel that it's not necessary because my deadline loom in my mind and I don't like seeing a fight. It could be a accident when someone is curious :) My mother who was outside in that time and knew what happened, and she called me to see the fight. It is because polices appear to catch crimes. Actually, polices don't usually appear immediately when violence erupt. Then, I stopped my study and went out to know what happened near my home. After listening neighbour tell about the crime, I think that the robbery is very stupid. The crimes include 5 members and living in one home. 3 out of 5 made a situation which got hit a women and took out her handbag. I think that the bag contained mobile phone. Maybe it is iPhone which turn on 3G and GPS, and logging her moving. The police traced the robbery and arrested crimes. Victim' relative fought them, despite it could be not good in the law. Robberies who don't know about new technology is stupid and easy to be arrested.

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A Robbery near my home

Today, a lot of people near my house stood in a huddle to see polices for catching/arresting some robbers. While I'm learning I was studying English, I suddenly was noticed by raised voices outside my house. I imagined that having there was a fight, based on that the voices. In Vietnam, although most people like to spectate/peep in on/observe/witness such things see that, but I feel that it's felt it was not necessary because my deadline is looming in my mind and I don't like seeing a fight. It There could be a serious accident when someone is too curious :)

My mother who was outside in at that time and knew what had happened, and she called me to see the fighting. It is was because police appeared arrived to catch prevent the crime/arrest the criminals. Actually, police don't usually appear immediately when violence erupts. Then, I stopped my study and went out to know see what was happening near my home.

After listening to a neighbour telling about the incident crime, I thought that the robbery is was very stupid. The crimes include involved 5 members and people all living in one house home. 3 out of the 5 made a situation which got hit a women and took out her handbag. I think that the bag contained a mobile phone. Maybe it is iPhone which turn on 3G and GPS, and logging her moving. The police traced the robbery and arrested the criminals. The victim' relatives fought with them, despite it although that could be not good in have been against the law. Robbers who don't know about the modern new technology are stupid and easily to be arrested.

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