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My wenkend I have a day off on sunday,i spent this wenkend in my home.I got up late staying in bed playing mobile phone as i am awake until11:00am,i feel a little dizy,maybe i missed the breakfast,need to get some energy ,it is sunny ,everything feels so nice,i cleaned my bedroom and living room after dinner,and then ,i feel dizzy again ,i have to have a rest for a while.I got up when i feel a little better then it was aroud 2:00 pm,after that i walked to the living room,and found my neighbour was in the sofa, we decide to watch a movie,it is called We Bought a Zoo,which represent a writer,Benjamin Mee,who bought a discard zoo in order to bring his two kids a brand life when he lost his lover,even try his best to protect and renew the zoo with the help the workers in the zoo ,finally,they get succed.I laughed and movied ,i kenw that the love is powerful. 我每周日都放假,这周我呆在了家里去渡过这一天,今天我起来的很晚醒来的时候都懒着在床上玩手机,到十一点我起来了感到头很重有些晕眩,可能是早餐没吃缺少能量的关系,今天天气很好,一切都很美好,吃午饭完我就开始打扫我的房间和客厅,打扫完又头晕我只好去躺着一会儿,好一点醒来两点多了,我走到了客厅,我一个邻居坐在沙发上,我们决定看一部电影,《我家买了动物园》,电影讲述了作家本杰明·米尔生在丧妻之痛时,买下了一座废弃的动物园,筹划和儿女换到全新的环境继续生活。带领着动物园内原有的工作者,一起维护修理动物园,最终让动物园审核通过,重新开园迎客,过程中我又笑又感动,认识到爱的力量是无穷的。

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My Weekend

 

I have had a day off on Sunday, I 英文的我非大写不可. 文章如人行为, 不要给读者見你是條懶惰虫... and spent this wenkend in my at home.__I got up late and stayed in bed playing games on the mobile phone.  It was not  as i am awake until11:00am that I finally got up and felt ,i feel a little dizzy.  maybe Perhaps it is due to the lack of energy from the I missed the breakfast. ,need to get some energy ,

 

It is was sunny outside and ,everything feels felt so nice.  After lucnch,_I cleaned my bedroom and living room. after dinner, 你用錯字了and Then ,I feel felt dizzy again and so  ,I have to have took a rest for a while.__When I got up whenI feel felt a little better but then it was around 2:00 pm already. ,after that I walked into the living room,and found to see my neighbour was sitting in the sofa. We decide to watch "We Bought a Zoo", a movie, it is called We Bought a Zoo,which represent a It was about the writer,_Benjamin Mee,_who in his grief over the death of his wife, had bought a dilapidated discard zoo in order to bring his two kids to continue life in a brand life environment with his children. when he lost his lover,even try his best to protect and renew the zoo with the help the workers in the zoo , Under his lead, with the remaining staff of the zoo, they restored the place and finally passing the inspections, the zoo was opened to visitors again. ,they get succeeded. 沒有你的中版, 我就不知道有这么細節描述 During the movie, I laughed and was very moved, letting me movied ,i kenw that the love is realized how powerful love is.

 

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我每周日都放假,这周我呆在了家里去渡过这一天,今天我起来的很晚醒来的时候都懒着在床上玩手机,到十一点我起来了感到头很重有些晕眩,可能是早餐没吃缺少能量的关系,今天天气很好,一切都很美好,吃午饭完我就开始打扫我的房间和客厅,打扫完又头晕我只好去躺着一会儿,好一点醒来两点多了,我走到了客厅,我一个邻居坐在沙发上,我们决定看一部电影,《我家买了动物园》,电影讲述了作家本杰明·米尔生在丧妻之痛时,买下了一座废弃的动物园,筹划和儿女换到全新的环境继续生活。带领着动物园内原有的工作者,一起维护修理动物园,最终让动物园审核通过,重新开园迎客,过程中我又笑又感动,认识到爱的力量是无穷的。

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