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Diary. Day 1( 64 days till the exams *-*)
From now on I'm going to write here some notes everyday. I'm not sure if anybody will read or correct them, but probably it doesn't matter because you know it's really fun to read old diaries(I have had an experience of doing it. since I've been writing them since I was 10 :D )
Well, first a little bit about me. I was born in southern Russia and my full name is Kiselev David Sergeievich (in the past I had known considered myself my name as Kiselyov but lately I found out that they wrote my surname as Kiselev in the official papers so yeah now I am Kiselev :)) ) Currently, I'm residing live in a multinational cosmopolitan town named Armavir and I'm studying in a state school 13, but two months later I will graduate from this funny and weird place school.
Actually, Russian school educational system obliges you to pass two required exams (Russian and math) and offers to choose other exams depending on the university and faculty you want to enter. As for me I chose English, history and social science therefore I guess next two months are gonna be really fun and crazy for me. Oh, by the way the soonest exam is gonna be is on May 28.
Now finally, about this day. The day was pretty useless and boring until 2 p.m when I started reading the 2nd volume of "War and peace" . I've done will have done reading it by now the time you read this text and tonight I wanna read the third volume. Anyway I think I've written too much , but it's just because today because it's is the first day note. I plan to do a lot of things tomorrow(for example to learn Engilsh, cause mine is really terrible) and of course I'll write here once again as it's a daily diary
Hi David,
first of all your english is really not terrible; on the contrary quite impressive.
few remarks for you:
1- the structures as "gonna, wanna" are generally used in spoken american english, in writing it's better to keep their long forms. However since it's a type of self writing/talking in this context I kept them as they are.
2- Please check the use of perfect tenses (present-past and future)
Keep up the good work :) and good luck in your exams.
Duygu
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