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Help to correct a mail hi everybody! I need some help to correct this mail. I explain to you the context: I am a young architect and with some friends, we register for the architecture competitive EUROPAN. The site of project is in Austria, and a visit is provided to discover this site. I need to register my team for this day. "Good Afternoon. My team is just register for st polten. I saw the visit is provided for april 20th. We want to go to this visit. Need-we fill for a entry form or have you need some informations to complete our register? Cordially"

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Good Afternoon, 


My team has/have just registered for st polten. I saw the visit is scheduled on April 20th. We would love to join this visit.


Do we need to fill any application form? What infomation do we need to provide you with?

 

Sincerely,
Cordially

 

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OU

 

 

Dear Sir/Madame,

 

My team has registered online for EUROPAN.  We would love to join the tour which has been scheduled on April 20th.  Could you please advise me how we can apply, and what information you need?

 

Best Regards,

Cordially

 

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Bon voyage! :)

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Help to correct a mail

hi everybody!
I need some help to correct this mail. I explain to you the context:
I am a young architect and with some friends, we register for the architecture competitive EUROPAN. The site of project is in Austria, and a visit is provided to discover this site. I need to register my team for this day.

"Good Afternoon.

My team wants to register for st polten. I saw the visit is scheduled for april 20th.

We want to join this visit.
Do we need to fill out an entry form or do you need some more informations to complete our register?

Cordially"

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I see. I am sorry. Anyway Good-luck for your project work.
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hi. I talk about Austria (Wien) and not Australia ^^
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I am sorry. I don't believe that I can help you.

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