Please, correct my mistakes anyone

This morning the time had come for us to begin our last trek to reach and we began the last part of our way to the Shadow lake. We must need to walk some miles for this. There are Our allies will join us near this the lake.
"How much time do we have?" Asked Iron Dancer.
"At about 7 o'clock their spaceship will be flying over a surface of water." I replied. I
"It's meaning' that we can to This means that we can't walk slowly!" Said Den.
"We must reach arrived the Shadow Lake very quickly. Because We lose some time, if the enemy knows, what we are do- The enemy will know what we are doing if we waste any time." Answered I.
"Why?"
"Why!?" Squeaked I, tired of stupid questions, "because Goomey's Army wants to can to attack us."
When the sun was high in the sky, we (was?) going were walking in a forest. We needed to cross this forest, in order to for arrive to reach Shadow lake. For the first time of our way during our journey, I was joyful.
(Sometimes Den was funny, but a chuckle and a joy - it's some different things. (I don't understand this sentence.)) While Den and Iron Dancer were talking about something, my soul began was begining to sing any a song: "In the town, where I was born, lived a man, who sailed to sea! And he told us of his life..."
That moment was At that moment something bad happened. A terrible sound came to us There are many monsters were flying over the forrest We heard a terrible sound and we saw many monsters flying over the forest.
To be continued

This morning the time had come and we began the last part of our way to the Shadow Lake. We must had to walk some miles for to do this. There are our allies (or friends) will would join us. near this lake.
“How much time do we have?” asked Iron Dancer.
“About 7 o'clock their spaceship will be flying over a the surface of the water” I replied I
“That It's meaning' means that we can to walk slowly” said Den.
-We must arrived the at Shadow Lake very quikly soon, because if we lose some time, if the enemy will know what we do did” I answered. I.
“Why?”
“Why!?” I squeaked I, tired of stupid questions. “Because Goomey's Army can to attack us!”
When the sun was high in the sky, we (was?) were going into a forest. We needed to cross this pass through the forest, for to arrive to at Shadow Lake. For the first time of our way in our journey, I was joyful.
Sometimes Den was funny, but a chuckle and a joy - it's some different things ( I don’t understand this sentence, so I can’t give you a correction). While Den and Iron Dancer were talking about something, my soul was beginning to sing any a song: “In the town, where I was born, lived a man who sailed to sea. And he told us of his life...”
At that moment was something bad happened. A terrible sound came to us. There are were many monsters were flying over the forest.
To be continued