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四月去中国
我们的中国旅行很快就要来了。我开始觉得有一点紧张 ( "有一点" means "a little", you could not use just " 一点" ) 。我今天找到了一个在西安旅馆 ( Adding a "了" after a verb means the past ), 所以我很高兴。张家界比较难准备。没有很多美国人去过。网上的建议很少。我努力地准备。( Between an adjective and a noun, you should use "的", but "prepare" is a verb, so we need a adverb here. "adjective + 地 " becomes an adverb. "的" and "地", these two words have the same pronounciation, so pay attention when you use it. ) 我不知道我们应该花多少天留在那里。( "花" have two sens, when it is a noun, it means "flower"; when it is a verb, it means "spend". Use " 花 + time/money + do sth " )
I hope that I have explicated clearly. Btw, a little suggestion: you can stay arround 4 days at Zhangjiajie. (Two days in the natural park, 1 day in Tianmen Montain, 1 day or plus at Fenghuang )
Wish you have a wonderful journey in China !
四月去中国
我们的中国旅行很快就要到来了。我开始感觉到一点紧张。我今天找到一个在西安的旅馆, 所以我很高兴。张家界比较难准备。那里没有很多美国人去过,所以网上的建议很少。我努力地准备。我不知道我们应该留在那里多少天。
四月去中国
我们的中国之旅/行很快就要来了,我开始觉得有一点紧张。我今天找到了一个西安的旅馆, 我很高兴。去张家界旅行前的准备很难/去张家界旅行比较难准备,美国人去过的不多,网上的建议很少。我尽力地准备。我不知道我们应该在那里停留多少天。
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