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Please help me about these two sentence expressions : ) 1.Although the number of visits abroad by UK residents, and visits to UK by overseas residents both rose, however, visits abroad by UK residents grew far faster than visits to the UK by overseas resident. 2.The period between 1979 to 1985 saw a moderate growth from about 110 million visits to 20 million visits. As for the number of visits to the UK, it increased very slowly in the first 6 years, and then it accelerated a bit, peaking at around 27 million in 1999.

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Please help me about these two sentence expressions : )

1.Although the number of visits abroad by UK residents, and visits to the UK by overseas residents both rose, however, visits the rate of going abroad by UK residents grew far much faster than visits to the UK by overseas resident. 明顯

2.The period between from 1979 to 1985 [or "... between 1979 and 1985" ]saw a moderate growth from about 110 million visits to 20 million visits. As for the number of However, visits to the UK, it increased very slowly in the first 6 six years and then it the rate accelerated a bit, before peaking at around 27 million in 1999.

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Please help me about these two sentence expressions : )

1.Although the number of visits abroad by UK residents and visits to UK by overseas residents both rose, however, visits abroad by UK residents grew far faster than visits to the UK by overseas residents.

2.The period between 1979 and 1985 saw a moderate growth from about 110 million visits to 20 million visits. As for the number of visits to the UK, it increased very slowly in the first 6 years, and then it accelerated a bit, peaking at around 27 million in 1999.

 

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