sunday

Hi guys,

Today was a very lazy day. I did really nothing apart from enjoying my current literature: "The Rosie Project". The weather was sunny and warm and so I could lay around on our balcony and savour life. In the morning I went for jogging and so I was in a balanced (happy) mood for the rest of the day.
About the book I started to read yesterday I can only laugh :) It is very funny, and I have much pleasure with enjoy the novel very much. I just noticed that there are a view details that do not exactly complete Don Tillman`s character. For example, he owns an iPhone. This would never be the case in reality because a guy like him who is versed with technique in technology and has advanced computer skills and who additionally uses very unconservative methods to manage his life would use an Android device and boycott a company like Apple. He would support a system like Android that could be edited programmed by anyone.
Yeah, I know, this is only interesting for you if you also read the book but if this is the case you can leave a comment to my statement.
Nevertheless, I hope you have fun correcting this text. Next time I'll have a more fascinating topic.

Till then: study hard, party harder :)

Really good job, Elena. Just a few very small changes. You'd have no problem being understood. Keep it up!

sunday

Hi guys,

today was a very lazy day. I did really nothing apart from enjoying my current literature: "the Rosie Project". The weather was sunny and warm and so I could lay around on our balcony and savour live. In the morning I went for jogging and so I was in a balanced mood for the rest of the day.
About the book I started to read yesterday, I can only laugh :) It is very funny and I have much pleasure with the novel. I just noticed that there are a view few details that do not exactly complete Don Tillman`s character. For example he owns an iPhone. This would never be the case in reality because a guy like him, who is versed with technique in technology and has advanced computer skills and who, aditionally, uses very unconservative methods to manage his live, would use an android device and boycott a company like apple. He would support a system like android that could be edited by anyone.
Yeah, I know, this is only interesting for you if you also read the book, but if this is the case you can leave a comment to my statement.
Nevertheless I hope you have fun correcting this text. Next time I'll have a more fascinating topic.

Till then: study hard, party harder :)

Excellent job! Just very few mistakes! My recommendation would be to pay attention to very long sentences, you need some punctuation in the middle of them. Keep on the great job!