just feel bored
finally l decided to write an essay,like a diary.
though l'm tired and sleepy, l'm most bored.
the holiday started, but l have no idea on how to arrange it.
just movie,music,class,sleep,besides chatting.
well, l have enough time to sleep,and less homework now.
it's such a chill day in shanghai this winter that l even don't want to go out!
however, it was awesome that shanghai snowed before.
it was really beautiful! is it from heaven, blessing my grandfather there!
and chinese spring festival is coming, time flies so fast.now it's going to be 2011!
but l still look like a child, don't know what the future will be.
oh, over 11 pm, l will be older then.
l don't want to sleep, though l love it
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just feel bored
I just feel bored.
I've finally decided to write an essay, or a diary.
though l'm tired and sleepy, l'm most bored.
Though I'm tired and sleepy, I'm mostly just bored.
the holiday started, but l have no idea on how to arrange it.
My holidays have started, but I have no idea what to plan for them.
just movie,music,class,sleep,besides chatting.
I've just been watching movies, listening to music, going to class, sleeping, and of course chatting.
well, l have enough time to sleep,and less homework now.
Well... I have enough time to sleep and less homework now.
it's such a chill day in shanghai this winter that l even don't want to go out!
These days in Shanghai it's so cold that I don't even want to step foot outside!
however, it was awesome that shanghai snowed before.
However, the snow we received was awesome.
it was really beautiful! is it from heaven, blessing my grandfather there!
It was really beautiful! It was a gift from Heaven, a blessing from my grandfather there!
and chinese spring festival is coming, time flies so fast.now it's going to be 2011!
Chinese Spring Festival is coming. Time flies so quickly. It'll be 2011 soon!
but l still look like a child, don't know what the future will be.
But, I still look like a child and don't know what my future will be.
oh, over 11 pm, l will be older then.
Oh, after 11PM I'll be older.
l don't want to sleep, though l love it
I don't want to go to sleep, even though I love sleeping.
It's easier for me to just rewrite everything, so sometimes you had no mistakes but I rewrote what you wrote. If you have any questions about why I changed something, or if I made a mistake about some of your meaning please let me know. :D
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yeah, please.thank u! l think l have a lot problem on grammer,:)
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I like this entry. I feel the same way during my vacation (which is now). My classes are also suspended until the end of February so I have too much free time. The weather is cool and I don't feel like going outside. I just stay home, drink coffee, chat with people, play games and watch movies.
We had some snow in Nanjing as well, but not much. I am from Canada and we get more snow there.
Would you like me to correct your notebook entry? I can if you want. :D
Mike...
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