I  write note at here for the first time. This is the first time I write note here.

I was shown this website by my teacher. My teacher has shown this website to me.
I'm not good at English, but I want to travel abroad.
So, please collect my sentence on in notebook.
Thank you!

This is my first note on this website.iI write note at the first time.

MyI was shown this website by my teacher showed me this website.. 
I'm not good at English, but I want to travel abroad. 
So, please corrllect my sentence on notebook. 
Thank you!

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The first time I'm writing a note

My teacher showed me this website.

I'm not good at speaking English, but I want to travel abroad.

So, please correct my sentences on notebook.

Thank you!

NOTES:

1. Because this is a title, many ways are OK

2. Usually, someone shows something to you

3. Verb was missing; 'not good in English' is also OK

4. Correct

5. Because it's an application, 'on' is OK, 'in' is usually with actual object

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