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One beer for each day of a year Catalonia has almost one hundred of beer trademarks of independent producers who believe and claim that is a gastronomic product and not only to calm the thirst. This weekend there is a celebration called Beer Festival at the Maritime Musuem in Barcelone. The archeological site of sant Sadurní de Begues show how our ancestors discoveedr the beer. All that began by chance with some cereals left outdoors inside of a silo which fermented due to the rain. Nowadays the beer production is a more complex process. The GECAN (Labor Union of Catalan Beer Producers) official figures assure that nowadays there are up to a one hundred Catalan beer trademarks and forty factories that produce beer in Catalonia. A book about these beers have been published whose title is Cerveses artesanes de la nostra terra (Larousse) ( Artisan beers of our country). During the Beer Festival, David Moya is going to teach how to produce an artisan Beer,

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One beer for each day of the a year

Catalonia has almost one hundred brands of beer trademarks of from independent producers who believe and claim that beer is a gastronomic product and is not only a means to quench to calm the thirst.
This weekend, there is a celebration called The Beer Festival at the Maritime Musuem in Barcelona. The archeological site of Saint Sadurní de Begues shows/demonstrates how our ancestors discovered the beer. It all that began by chance when with some cereals were left outdoors, inside of a silo, which resulted in them fermenting due to the rain. Nowadays, the beer production is a more complex process.
The GECAN (Labor Union of Catalan Beer Producers) official figures assure us that today nowadays there are up to a one hundred brands of Catalan beer trademarks and forty breweries which factories that produce it. beer in Catalonia. A book about these beers  have been published whose titled is Cerveses Artesanes de la Nostra Terra (Larousse) ( Artisan beers of our country) has recently been published.
During the Beer Festival, David Moya is going to teach how to produce an artisan beer.

Well done Lidia.  I wish I could attend this festival!

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One beer for each day of a year

Catalonia has almost one hundred of beer trademarks of independent producers who believe and claim that it is a gastronomic product and not only just to calm quench the thirst.
This weekend there is a celebration called Beer Festival at the Maritime Musuem in Barcelone. The archeological site of sant Sadurní de Begues will show how our ancestors discovered the beer. All that began by chance with some cereals left outdoors inside of a silo which fermented due to the rain. Nowadays the beer production is a more complex process.
The GECAN (Labor Union of Catalan Beer Producers) official figures assure that nowadays there are up to a one hundred Catalan beer trademarks and forty factories that produce beer in Catalonia. A book about these beers have been published whose title is Cerveses artesanes de la nostra terra (Larousse) ( Artisan beers of our country).
During the Beer Festival, David Moya is going to teach how to produce an artisan Beer,

 

Cheers! My corrections are in red and suggestions to sound more natural in blue/grey.

You can say either "the beer production" or "the production of beer".

You can say "up to a one hundred" or "up to a one hundred".

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Nice! Beer is good and you're writing is not bad either. I just think you misspelled "discovered".

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