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Please help me figure out the words of this 2-minute long Youtube audio poem. Youtube link: https://youtube.com/watch?v=j3OMxXYocRM Here's my attempt. kindly correct the mistakes and complete the missing words: She's like goose bumps She's like the icicles of a whisper on a cold October night. She's like the spark between two swords clashing. She's like the kiss of a morning battle. She could be the armour to a knight, and the blood of an open wound. Her eyes are as warm as the center of the sun. Her smile is like the light on the dark side ( maybe:of the moon). Her presence is like gravity. The thought of her makes time stand still. I don't know if i'll see her again, it's like the tears of an angel. But her memory's like a feena about to get us fixed. Her body is like the waves in ocean, but its temptation's like the sharks.... When those of her know i'm immune, those're like- like a vaccination I didn't ask for. The doctor was like a broken heart, so I know it's not how i felt. But now I will never love another. And it's refreshing because her beauty is love itself. I'd say no competitors, but that's not the right words.

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You did excellent as the narrator is mumbling all the time. I have a very difficult time in able to understand what he was muttering!
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Good job!
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She's like goosebumps.

She's like the icicles off a whisper on a cold October night. 

She's like the spark between two swords clashing.

She's like the kiss of a winning battle.

She could be the armour to a knight, and the blood of an open wound. 

Her eyes are as warm as the center of the sun.

Her smile is like the light on the dark side 

Her presence is like gravity.

The thought of her makes time stand still.

Not knowing if I'll see her again, is like the tears of an angel.

But her memory's like a fiend about to get his fix.

Her body is like the waves in the ocean, but her temptation is like the sharks that lay beneath

One dose of her and now I am immune. It was like- like a vaccination I didn't ask for.

The doctor was like a broken heart, so understands how I felt. (I can't make this out)

But now I will never love another.

And it's refreshing, because her beauty is love itself.

I'd say no one compares, but that's not the right words.

She is in a category of her own

She's like the icicles off a whisper on a cold October night.

She's like goosebumps

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