13-03-15

Today is a warm day and I we have walked were walking with my daughter in a park for about 2 hours. We have found the first spring flowers and a the broken tree, - a beaver cut down him.

Hi Lina,

just few remarks for you

we're in today. You can't use the past tense when you're talking about an unfinished period of time. You can't use a present tense for things happened in that unfinished period, either. so the right grammer is perfect tense.

you should revise the use of articles (a/an/the)

dump was not the right verb and you have used a hidden relative clause that's why you can't use "him" or any pronoun implying the subject of the clause.

keep up the good work :)

Duygu

13-03-15

Today was a  warm day and we walked with my daughter in the  park for about 2 hours. We found the first spring flowers! And there was a  broken tree, - a beaver cut it down.

13-03-15

Today was a is warm day and we walked were walking with my daughter in the park  for about 2 hours. We found the first spring flowers! And There was a the broken tree, - a beaver had cut it down. dumped him.