Things that happen when you are learning a new language
I went to London with my boyfriend three years ago. We visited a lot of beautiful places there for example: The Tower of London, British Museum, National Gallery, London Eye and others. We visited the HMS Belfast ship also. When we finished our holidays in London we came back to Ibiza. Some days later we went to my boyfriend's parents house to have dinner. We were talking about our holidays and I said: "We have been in the HMS "Breakfast" ship", and all the people started to laugh (my boyfriend's mother is English). These are things that happen when you are learning a new language! :)
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Things that happen when you are learning a new language
I went to London with my boyfriend three years ago. We visited a lot of beautiful places there. For example: The Tower of London, the British Museum, the National Gallery, the London Eye and others. We visited the HMS Belfast ship also. When we finished our holidays in London/When our holidays came to an end, we came back to Ibiza. Some days later we went to my boyfriend's parents house to have dinner. We were talking about our holidays and I said: "We have been in on/onboard the HMS "Breakfast" ship", and all the people/everyone started to laugh (my boyfriend's mother is English). These are things that happen when you are learning a new language! :)
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Very well done! Most of the corrections I've made are simply suggestions to make your writing sound a bit more natural. Keep up the good work! :D
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Jajaja, gracias por tu historia a ti también! Saludos!
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I understand completely Paz! I am learning spanish and a while ago I meant to say to my wife "Creo que cuando bebo tequila, hablo mucho mejor." but instead I said "Creo que cuando bebo tequila, hablo muchas mujeres." We had a good laugh. Thanks for your story.
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