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International women's day International women's day happened at the last sunday here in Brazil. Many women received flowers and congratulations for this special day. But many people ask themselves: what does "International women's day " mean? Then, lets go to explain which meaning this day. At the day eigth of March at 1857, some workers women in a tissues factory localized in north of the New York, stopped the work to insecure claims better conditions of the work. As reduction the hours worked and better salaries. The manifestation was repressed with much violence. The women were locked into factory and were burned. About 130 weavers died carbonized in an inhuman act.

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International women's day

International women's day happened at the last Sunday here in Brazil. Many women received flowers and congratulations for this special day.

But many people ask themselves: What does "International women's day " mean?

Well then, lets go to explain which what the meaning of this day is. (OR, Well then, let's explain it's meaning). 

On the day eighth of March in 1857, some women workers in a textiles factory localized in the north part of the New York (OR, "in northern New York"), and stopped the working to insecure claims better working conditions, as well as a reduction in hours worked and better salaries.

The manifestation was received with much violence. The women were locked inside the factory and were burned. About 130 weavers died carbonized burned to ashes in an inhuman act.

 

"About a 130 weavers were carbonized..." is ok to say, but "burned to ashes" is a more common way to say it.

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International women's day
 
International women's day happened at the took place/was observed last Sunday here in Brazil. Many women received flowers and congratulations for this special day.
But many people ask themselves: what does "International women's day " mean?
Then, lets go try to explain which the meaning/significance of this day.
At On the day eighth of March at 1857, some workers women workers in a tissues factory locatedlized in the north of the New York, stopped the work to insecure claims make demands for better conditions of the work, such as reduction of the hours worked and better salaries.
The manifestation demonstration was repressed with much violence. (mmm cannot find evidence of that - nor of a fire that day) The women were locked into inside the factory and were burned. (no, that is not true as far as I can see) About 130 weavers died carbonized in an inhuman act.
 
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_Women's_Day

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