Drunk Driving
There are many car accidents happened every day, especially in Hong Kong. Drunk driving is a common phenomenon nowaday in our society.
There are many bad effects of drunk driving. To begin with, drinking is harmful to the driver's health. In addition, when people are drunk, their mind will become unconscious so that the innocent victims are easily got hurt.
In my view, for the sake of benefiting people, our government should initiate aggressive programs to advocate safe-driving, and make severe laws.
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Drunk Driving
There are many car accidentsThere are many bad effects of drunk driving. To begin with, drinking is harmful to the driver's health. In addition, when people are drunk, their mind will become unconscious
In my
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Drunk Driving
Many car accidents happened every day, especially in Hong Kong. These days drunk driving is a common problemThere are many bad effects of drunk driving. To begin with, drinking is harmful to the driver's health. In addition, when people are drunk, their judgement will become impaired. As a result,
In my view, for the sake of innocent people, our government should initiate aggressive programs to advocate safe-driving, and make strict laws to punish those who cause harm to others.
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