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A BAD THING!!! last evening,as I was shopping in a trousers shop of the center of the city with my friend ,my wallet was stolen by a motherfuck thief ,I'm so angry !! there are vaild ID card ,student's card ,bank card and a few of money... what a bad news for me,I called the bank immediately to declare lost my bank card,the clerk of the phone-banking told me that I should go through the bank where I opened my account in fifteen days . thanks goodness ,I didn't shopping alone ,I borrowed some money form him ,went back home then ~! last ,I 'll told all of my friendship ,be careful when you are shopping !!

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A BAD THING!!!
*I'M SO UNLUCKY!!!

last evening,as I was shopping in a trousers shop of the center of the city with my friend ,my wallet was stolen by a motherfuck thief ,I'm so angry !!
*Last evening, while shopping for trousers in the center of the city (downtown) with my friend my wallet was stolen by a motherfucking thief.  I'm so angry!!!

there are vaild ID card ,student's card ,bank card and a few of money...
*I had some ID cards, my student card, bank card, and a little money in there...

what a bad news for me,I called the bank immediately to declare lost my bank card,the clerk of the phone-banking told me that I should go through the bank where I opened my account in fifteen days .
*This is such bad news for me.  I called the bank immediately to declare my bank card lost.  The phone banking clerk told me that I should go to the bank where I opened my account within the next fifteen days.

thanks goodness ,I didn't shopping alone ,I borrowed some money form him ,went back home then ~!
*Thank goodness I wasn't shopping alone.  I borrowed some money from my friend and went back home~

last ,I 'll told all of my friendship ,be careful when you are shopping !!
*Finally, I'm telling all my friends "Be careful when you are shopping!!!"

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