My favorite relative
Really i wouldnt say have a favorite relative, i think lie. Is smarter say whi6t whom have better relation ship. i would say that person es my brother. His name is Fabricio, he is taller than me, he is bald also, but has a beautifull eyes brown and i think is handsome and funny, likes to dance an hang out with his girlfriend at the disco.
i would say is my support, a responsability person, si that is my favorite relative.
Nowadays my brother manages a Supermarket; Althoug his profession is a bussines, he is a sportsman, kiles a bike , a basketball and also train in the gym. Actually he has trhee children, their name are Emily, Mia an Fabricio Jr.
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My favorite relative
Really I wouldn't say I have a favorite relative, I think it's a lie. It is better to say with whom do I have a better relationship. I would say that person is my brother. His name is Fabricio. He is taller than me, he is also bald also, but has a beautifull brown eyes brown and I think he is handsome and funny. He likes to dance and hang out with his girlfriend at the disco.
i would say he is my support, is a responsible person, si that and he is my favorite relative.
Nowadays my brother manages a Supermarket. Although his profession is in business, he is a sportsman who likes to bike, play basketball and also train in the gym. Actually, he has three children as well. Their names are Emily, Mia and Fabricio Jr.
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