thrashaolin's notebook entry: Jan 20, 2011
我刚才收到了一个非常好的消息：我得了奖学金！我现在能去北京留学免费的，太棒了！不过应该继续努力.
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北京欢迎你，你可以听一下这首歌。
哈哈 ， 是真的欢迎你。 现在你应该差不多来北京了吧？？
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好好学习，天天向上
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thrashaolin's notebook entry: Jan 20, 2011
我刚才收到了一条0
恭喜恭喜
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thrashaolin's notebook entry: Jan 20, 2011
Congratulations! It's great!However, there are some problems in your sentences.
我刚才（刚才，我——I would like to put the adverbial in front as it's the usual way or Chinese saying.）收到了一个（一条——This is the problem of your ）非常好的消息：我得了（获得了——"得了"implies in some way that you get the scholarship by chance, while "获得了"usually means that you've made some effort to reach it.）奖学金！我现在能去北京留学免费的（我现在能免费去北京留学），太棒了！不过还应该继续努力.
Wish my advice would do some help to you! Come on! Welcome here to China!
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