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First notebook entry: Introducing myself hi.. my english is very poor so i don`t write in english well but i will aways learn english because i wanna travel to oversee especially i wanna see Arsenal game in england

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi.

My English is not very good so I don't write English well.
However, I'll continue to learn English because I want to travel to overseas.
I especially want to see the Arsenal game in England.


이건 시작하자...

매문장의첫번째글자는항상대문자로 합니다.

i wanna (아닙니다)  
I want to (네...맞은 대답입니다)

England & English >>>> 항상  대문자로 합니다.


빨간색    = 대문자로써주세요.    Capitalization
파란색   = 정정 & 철자                 Correction & Spelling
녹색        = 더자연스러운방법    More natural / common & Optional
보라색    = 코멘트 / 제안              Comment - Suggestion
 밑줄       = 구두점과 띄어쓰기   Punctuation - Spacing
© Color Correction Key by Nancy4366
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi..
My English is very poor so i don`t write in english well. <----- you can combine these sentences :)
but I will aways learn English because I want to travel overseas.  <----- Typically, we don't start sentences with 'but' since it's a conjunction. You should just combine those 2 sentences.
especially I especially want to see an Arsenal game in England.

----- You should capitalize words at the beginning of your sentences! Also put periods at the end. ^^
I hope this helped!
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정정 후에, 게시하는 다시 그것을 필요 없습니다. After someone corrects it, you don't need to post it again.
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Hi
My English is not very good so i don`t write English well.
However, I`ll continue to learn English because i want to travel to overseas.
I especially want to see the Arsenal game in England.


......^^;;;  Thanks to mandykyoya and Nancy4366

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