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Viaggio a Nagasaki Prossimo sabato andrò a Nagasaki con il mio amico per vedere la nostra amica. Il mio amico vive a Miyazaki. Miyazaki è sud di la mia casa e Nagasaki è nord di la mia casa, così lui mi prenderà e andremo insieme la sua macchina. 4 o 5 ore da la mia casa...molto lontana. Il prossimo giorno, Domenica, c'è la festa di ostrica. Voglio mangiare tante ostrice^^ Voglio andare subito! Next Sunday I'll go to Nagasaki with my friend for seeing our friend at the time of university. My friend lives in Miyazaki. Miyazaki is the south place of my living and Nagasaki is the north place of my living, so he'll take me and go together with his car. It takes 4 or 5 hours from my house...very far. The next day, Sunday, there is the festival of oyster in Nagasaki. I want to eat many oysters^^ I'm very looking forward to traveling.

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Emanuele ha già corretto l'italiano, io correggo solo l'inglese : )


Next Sunday I am going to Nagasaki with my friend to visit our friend from university.
My friend lives in Miyazaki. Miyazaki is south of where I live and Nagasaki is north of where I live, so he is picking me up and we are going together with his car.
It takes 4 or 5 hours from my house...very far.
The next day, Sunday, there is the Festival of Oysters in Nagasaki.
I want to eat many oysters^^
I'm really looking forward to our trip.

 

Have a wonderful visit with your friends, Chiaki!!  : )

 

Just a note about the future: 

When you have already made clear plans ahead of time and you know where and how you will do something, you should use the present continuous tense.  For example: "I am going to Nagasaki on Sunday." 

If you make a decision at that time, then you should use the future tense. For example if a friend calls you and asks you if you also want to go with him tomorrow... you can say "Yes, I will come too!".   This is a decision you made while you were talking, not something that was already planned when you talked with him.  

I'll give you a scenario:

 

Albert and Rachel:  Hello Lisa, would you like to come with us tomorrow?  We are going to the sea and then to a restaurant. 

Lisa:  Sure!  I will come too! 

Albert:  Ok, we will pick you up at 3.

Lisa:  Wonderful, see you tomorrow!  Thanks for inviting me!

Lisa to her friend Beatrice:   Hello Beatrice!  I am so happy! Tomorrow I am going to the sea with Albert and Rachel.  Then we are eating at a restaurant.  They are picking me up at 3.

 

 

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Viaggio a Nagasaki

Il prossimo sabato andrò a Nagasaki con il un mio amico per vedere la una nostra amica.
Il mio amico vive a Miyazaki. Miyazaki è a sud di la mia casa di casa mia e Nagasaki è a nord di la mia casa di casa mia, così lui mi verrà a prendere e andremo insieme con la sua macchina.
Sono 4 o 5 ore da la mia casa da casa mia...è molto lontano.
Il prossimo giorno Il giorno dopo, domenica, c'è la festa dell'ostrica.
Voglio mangiare tante ostriche^^
Voglio andarci subito!

 

 

puoi dire "il prossimo sabato" oppure "sabato prossimo"

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