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Learning a new thing It's always easy learn something when you're young. When you grown, you have the same problem: The shame. It's you're learning, for example, rollerskate, you could think: "I look stupid. I´m too old for doing this. All people are better than me. What are you thinking about? Go home and don't be ridiculous!" But, you know. These are only thoughts that your mind told to you. So, you could say "thank you, mind, but I don't need your help right now. You can repeat this wonderful thoughts all day long, but I'm not going to listen to you. Right now, I'm going to roller and nothing more. See you tomorrow!"

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Learning a new thing

It's always easier to learn something when you're young. When you grow up, you have the same problem: shame.
When learning, for example, rollerskating, you could think: "I look stupid. I´m too old  to do this. The rest of the people are better than me. What are you thinking about? Go home and don't be ridiculous!"
But, you know. These are only thoughts that are in your mind. So, you could say "thank you, mind, but I don't need your help right now. You can repeat these wonderful thoughts all day long, but I'm not going to listen to you. Right now, I'm going to roller and nothing else. See you tomorrow!"

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Learning a new thing

It's always easy to learn something when you're a child. However, when you are a grown up, you feel more self conscious about your mistakes have the same problem: The shame.
If  you're learning, for example, roller skating, you could think: "I look stupid. I´m too old for doing this. All people are better than me. What are you thinking about? Go home and don't be ridiculous!"
But, you know, these are only thoughts that your mind told to you. So, you could say "thank you, mind", but I don't need your help right now. You can repeat these wonderful thoughts all day long, but I'm not going to listen to you. Right now, I'm going to roller skate and nothing more. See you tomorrow!"

 

Roller Skating---------activity

 

Roller Skates------------ a pair of boots for skating

 

to roller skate=== infinitive + verb

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Learning a new thing

It's always easy to learn something when you're young. When you are grown up, you have the same a different problem: The shame embarrassment.
It's If you're learning, for example, to rollerskate, you could might think: "I look stupid. I´m too old for to be doing this. All the other people are better than me. What are you thinking about? Go home and don't be ridiculous!"
But, you know. These are only thoughts that your mind told is telling you. So, you could say "thank you, mind, but I don't need your help right now. You can repeat this wonderful thoughts all day long, but I'm not going to listen to you. Right now, I'm going to rollerskate and nothing more else. See you tomorrow!"

 

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I should learn this by heart! :)

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