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daily rutine I wake up at 6 oclock every days but i stand up at 6:10 affter i brush my teets and take a shower, i dress my uniform to the school and affter i make my breakfast at 6:45 and eat this to go out at 7 oclock.

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MY Daily ROutine

I wake up at 6 A.M. every MORNING, AND GET OUT OF BED at 6:10 A.M.  Affter  THAT, i brush my teetH and take a shower.  NEXT, i GET DRESSED.  I PUT ON my SCHOOL uniform.  THEN,   i make my breakfast at 6:45 A.M.  FINNALY, I LEAVE HOME at 7 oclock.

 

1.  All of my corrections are capitalized so that you can see the corrections quickly.  You need help with idiomatic phrases to help your wiring sound more like English writing.  For example, I changed your phrase to read...'get out of bed';  'i get dressed'.  'i put on'  These are phrasal verbs that native speakers and writers use.

 

2.  You need a conclusion.  How do you feel about your morning?  Is it pleasant, or would you prefer to stay in bed?  Try to write a conclusion expressing what you think about your morning routine.

 

3.  Look at the changes that I made to your heading.  Your heading should also be in the center of your page.

 

I offer a beginning writing class which I think would help you.

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daily routine

I wake up at 6 oclock every day but i get up at 6:10.   After i brush my teets and take a shower, i dress for school in my uniform and after that i make my breakfast at 6:45 and eat. Then I go out at 7 o'clock.

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