First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello ,I am Armyao~
Age:26
Education:Master
Interesting:Badminton, Photo ,Tour,Java,c#...
sex:boy
city:Guilin,CN
etc...
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Hello ,I am Armyao~
Age:26Education:Master
*Education: Master's
-Here the level of your education is possessive, as in you have the level of a master, or a master's level.
Interesting:Badminton, Photo ,Tour,Java,c#...
*Interests: Badminton, photography, travel, Java, C+...
-Interests should be plural as you have many. Photo is a sheet with a picture on it, photography is the practice of taking pictures. Tour I'll assume means you like to travel. I also assume c# means C+ or C++ or something like that.
sex:boy
city:Guilin,CN
etc...
-Do not use etc here. etc means that the rest of the information follows the same pattern set out by the previous information. In your profile we cannot guess what pattern there is because more of the information is not connected. Omit this part.
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