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What I want These days, I don't want things. Until few years ago, I wanted something like clothes, bags and so on. When I got something that I want, I was so excited and happy. Now, I want much experiences and memories than things. To be honest, I might get bored to buy something. According to one study, pleasant experiences makes people happier than getting things. I hadn't might notice that , but I understood that. I hope that I enjoy myself everyday life now and forever, If I don't have things. Thank you for reading!

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What I want

These days, I don't want things.

OR: These days, I don't want possessions.


Until a few years ago, I wanted something things like clothes, bags and so on.
When I got something (that) I wanted, I was so excited and happy.


Now, I want much experiences and memories more than things. OR: ...more than possessions.

 

To be honest, I might get bored to buy something of buying things. 


According to one study, pleasant experiences makes people happier than getting things.
I hadn't might notice that, Although I hadn't known about the study, but I already understood that.

I hope that I enjoy myself everyday life now and forever, even if I don't have many things.

Thank you for reading!

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I think you should pay more attention to the way use past tenses. 

When I got something that I want, I was so excited and happy. - can you find a mistake here?

Now, I want much experiences and memories than things. Than is a comparative preposition. However, you don't have the comparative more. Study this: http://learnenglishteens.britishcouncil.org/grammar-vocabulary/grammar-videos/comparative-and-superlative-adjectives

 

 

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