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What I want
These days, I don't want things.
OR: These days, I don't want possessions.
Until a few years ago, I wanted something things like clothes, bags and so on.
When I got something (that) I wanted, I was so excited and happy.
Now, I want much experiences and memories more than things. OR: ...more than possessions.
To be honest, I might get bored to buy something of buying things.
According to one study, pleasant experiences makes people happier than getting things.
I hadn't might notice that, Although I hadn't known about the study, but I already understood that.
I hope that I enjoy myself everyday life now and forever, even if I don't have many things.
Thank you for reading!
I think you should pay more attention to the way use past tenses.
When I got something that I want, I was so excited and happy. - can you find a mistake here?
Now, I want much experiences and memories than things. Than is a comparative preposition. However, you don't have the comparative more. Study this: http://learnenglishteens.britishcouncil.org/grammar-vocabulary/grammar-videos/comparative-and-superlative-adjectives
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