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Aslan Tlebzu/Kabardey Qafa Hi everyone, Hope you're doing well. :) Two years ago I heard a song which is composed by a sheep-man. This song has a sad story and I want to share this with you. Once upon a time there was a Caucasian sheep-man and he was traveling alone. One day he went to a Circassian village and he saw a very beautiful girl. He fell in love with her. He decided to stay there for his love. He couldn't even talk to her but he didn't give up from his love. While this time he was playing accordion in weddings. One day a family called him for their son's wedding day. He went there and he amused everybody in all evening. Everything was good. Finally bride and groom came in to wedding place. And he saw her. She was getting married. And he composed this song right there. He played this song until the morning. Everybody loved this song but they didn't understand it. This song is wonderful. It doesn't even need a legend. And it can make me feel so peaceful. :) Here's original song; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mrMF3Fuvl7g&list=LLdlHE6xAlGlUdnhky9p29Mw&index=3 And here's Aslan Tlebzu's cover; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBy8i_s2Zdg&list=LLdlHE6xAlGlUdnhky9p29Mw&index=2 I love both of them. Thanks! :)

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Aslan Tlebzu/Kabardey Qafa

Hi everyone,
Hope you're doing well. :)
Two years ago I heard a song which was composed by a shepherd. The song told a sad story and I want to share it with you.
Once upon a time there was a Caucasian shepherd and he was traveling alone. One day he went to a Circassian village and he saw a very beautiful girl and fell in love with her. He decided to stay there for his love. He couldn't even talk to her but he didn't give up on his love. During this time he was playing his accordion at weddings.
One day a family called him for their son's wedding day. He went there and he amused everybody in all evening. Everything was good. Finally the bride and groom came in to the wedding place. And he saw her, she was getting married. He composed this song right there and then. He played this song until the morning. Everybody loved this song but they didn't understand it.

This song is wonderful. It doesn't even need lyrics.
And it can make me feel so peaceful. :)

Here's original song;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mrMF3Fuvl7g&list=LLdlHE6xAlGlUdnhky9p29Mw&index=3

And here's Aslan Tlebzu's cover;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBy8i_s2Zdg&list=LLdlHE6xAlGlUdnhky9p29Mw&index=2

I love both of them.

Thanks! :)

 

-Thank you for posting these, I loved both versions too.

-I assumed that by 'legend' you meant lyrics (words). In English we have a noun, 'intrumental', for tunes without a singer. This song is an instrumental.

-We have the usage 'there and then' to describe something that was done exactly at that time and place.

-I combined several short sentences with a comma to improve sentence flow. A lot of short sentences consecutively gives it a choppy rythym.

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Aslan Tlebzu/Kabardey Qafa

Hi everyone,
Hope you're doing well. :)
Two years ago I heard a song which is composed by a sheep-man. That song has a sad story and I want to share it with you.
Once upon a time there was a Caucasian sheep-man and he was traveling alone. One day he went to a Circassian village and he saw a very beautiful girl. He fell in love with her. He decided to stay there for his love. Although he couldn't talk to her but he didn't give up from his love. While this time he was playing accordion in weddings. (He started playing accordion in weddings)

One day a family called him on their son's wedding day. He went there and he (entertained)amused everybody in all evening. Everything was good. Finally bride and groom came in to the wedding place;. And he saw her. She was getting married. And He composed this song right there. He played this song untill the morning. Everybody loved the song but they didn't understand it.

This song is wonderful. It doesn't even need a legend.
 It can make me feel so peaceful. :)

Here's original song;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mrMF3Fuvl7g&list=LLdlHE6xAlGlUdnhky9p29Mw&index=3

And here's Aslan Tlebzu's cover;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBy8i_s2Zdg&list=LLdlHE6xAlGlUdnhky9p29Mw&index=2

I love both of them.

Thanks! :)

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salam. the song is very very wonderful . I like it . yashason ashiglar
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If we don't know what the man is herding, 'herdsman' is fine. If it's sheep the usual word in my (British) English is 'shepherd'.
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Thank you! You're right but I chose sheep-man because it's easier to understand :)

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