제 일 (My Day)
오늘은 우체국에 갔어요. 제가 어려원대 생각했어 하지만 쉬었어요. 그다음에 홈플어스에 갔어요. 우유, 시리얼, 물하고 화장실 휴지를 샀어요. Dunkin Donuts에 3시간 공부했어요. 한국어 좋아해요.
Today I went to the post office. I thought it would be hard but it was easy. Then, I went to Home Plus. I bought milk, cereal, water and toilet tissue. I studied for 3 hours in Dunkin Donuts. I like Korean.
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제 일하루 (My Day)
오늘은 우체국에 갔어요. 제가 어려원대 생각했어 하울 줄 알았지만 쉬었웠어요. 그다음에 홈플어러스에 갔어요. 우유, 시리얼, 물하고 화장실 휴지를 샀어요. Dunkin Donuts에서 3시간 공부했어요. 한국어를 좋아해요.
Today I went to the post office. I thought it would be hard but it was easy. Then, I went to Home Plus. I bought milk, cereal, water and toilet tissue. I studied for 3 hours in Dunkin Donuts. I like Korean.
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Thank you for your help^^
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어려울 거라고 생각했지만 쉬웠어요.
홈플어스----->홈플러스
화장실휴지------->두루말이휴지
You did a great job.
A few corrections would just make it sound more natural. Hope it is helpful.
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