First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello，everyone.my name is Melon Luo，from China.
I hope i can make friends with u，and practice my oral English.
if you wanna to learn Chinese，pls do not hesitate to contact me！
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-Well... I don't really see many mistakes at all, but I'll correct what I can. :D
hello，everyone.my name is Melon Luo，from China.
*Hello everyone.
-In this case you should not use a comma between hello and everyone, you could use one after everyone and before my.
*Hello everyone, my name is Melon Luo.
-You cannot use 'from' because it does not agree with 'my name is'. You can say
*My name is Melon Luo, I'm from China.
-or
*I am Melon Luo, from China.
*I hope I can be friends with you and practice my oral English.
-Making friends is something that you do, not that you do with someone you want to become your friend.
if you wanna to learn Chinese，pls do not hesitate to contact me！
*If you wanna' learn Chinese please do not hesitate to contact me!
-In this case 'wanna' = 'want to', so you do not need to include a 'to' after it.
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hen gao xing renshi ni,ni gue hen piao liang....hope i said it right ^ ^
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