1/12/2015 Today is end of the winter vacation

It's been a while since the last time I wrote in my notebook last time.

OR: It's been a while since my last notebook entry.

I watched the a movie three days ago! (The movie is titled was called "Psycho-Pass")

OR: The title of the movie was...

I love this anime. I was very excited and moved felt inspired!!!

OR: I was moved... OR: It was very moving.... [We usually used 'moved / moving' if something is sad. 

By the way, today is end of the winter vacation. That's too bad:(
So, I can't use itaki often and (I) may not be able to send you a reply soon.
But I surely definitely will!

Let's keep being language partners from now on! :)

1/12/2015 Today is end of the (*our) winter vacation

*you can use "our" or "my", but it would sound best without anything here

It's been a while since the last time I wrote in my notebook last time.

I watched the a movie three days ago! (The movie is titled "PSYCHO-PASS")
I love this anime. I was very excited, and moved and inspired!!!

By the way, today is the end of the winter vacation. That's too bad. :(
So I can't won't be able to use itaki often and I may not be able to send *you guys a *replyies soon.

*"you guys" or "you all" may be roughly translated to みなさん; although it's still grammatically correct to use "you" by itself, in this context (and since it's conversational) it would sound better to add "guys" or "all" because it's the first time you address the readers in your entry and it kind of catches their attention

*sometimes in this context, since you are talking to an audience of more than 1 person and assuming more than 1 person will send you (a) message(s) in the future, I think it sounds better if you make it plural

But I surely will!

Let's *keep being language partners *from now on :)

*if you're using "keep being", it means that you're already language partners in the past and that you want to continue it. "from now on" implies that you're still just starting it. Using both phrases in the same sentence makes the tense inconsistent (were you already partners before, or are you just starting to be partners?)

Hope I helped! :)

1/12/2015

Today is end of the winter vacation　'the' is optional

It's been a while since I wrote notebook last time.

It's been a while since my last nootbook entry.

I watched the movie three days ago! (The movie is titled "PSYCHO-PASS")

A few days ago, I started watching a new anime called PSHYCHO-PASS.

I love this anime. I was very excited and moved inspired!!!

It was vey exciting and inspiring!

By the way, today is end of the winter vacation. That's too bad:(
So I can't use itaki often and I may not be able to send you a reply soon.
But I surely will!

Since today is the end of winter vacation, I may not be able to use italki as often as I would like to.  I may be a little late responding to any messages, but I will be sure to reply when I have time!

Let's keep being language partners from now on :)