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Playing for Change!
The American producer and sound engineer, Mark Johnson, has created “Playing for Change”--a multimedia music project--since in 2005. It’s a multimedia music project. Mark Johnson and his team would like aspire to/strive to/attempt to connect people and [bring] spread peace [all over the world] across the globe/around the world [with] through music.
So, Street artists in each different/various countries are used collabroate/work collaboratively to sing one song together; the result is absolutely wonderful!
There are [so] many musics songs [like] such as: "Stand By Me" (Ben E. King), "One Love" (Bob Marley), "War: No More Trouble" (Bob Marley), "Don’t Worry, Be Happy" (Bobby Mc Ferrin), and "Love Is All" (Roger Glover).
You will can find the YouTube channel here:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCn25nZ12HEZq_w_m_1DmbbA
My favorite song? “Down by the Riverside” which celebrates the 100th episode of "Playing For Change!" episode!!
And you, what is your favorite song? :)
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Playing for Change!
The American producer and sound engineer, Mark Johnson, created “Playing for Change”--a multimedia music project--in 2005. Johnson and his team aspire to connect people and spread peace across the globe through music. Street artists in different countries collabroate to sing one song together; the result is absolutely wonderful!
There are many songs such as: "Stand By Me" (Ben E. King), "One Love" (Bob Marley), "War: No More Trouble" (Bob Marley), "Don’t Worry, Be Happy" (Bobby Mc Ferrin), and "Love Is All" (Roger Glover).
You can find the YouTube channel here: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCn25nZ12HEZq_w_m_1DmbbA
My favorite song? “Down by the Riverside” which celebrates the 100th episode of "Playing For Change!"
And you, what is your favorite song? :)
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Playing for change!
The American producer and sound engineer, Mark Johnson, has created created “Playing for change” since in 2005. It’s a multimedia music project. Mark Johnson and his team would like want to connect people and bring peace all over the world with music.
So, Street artists in each various countries are used to collaborate to sing one song together. The result is absolutely wonderful!
There are so many musics songs like: Stand by me (Ben E. King), One love (Bob Marley), War: No more trouble (Bob Marley), Don’t worry be happy (Bobby Mc Ferrin), Love is all (Roger Glover).
You will can find the youtube channel here:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCn25nZ12HEZq_w_m_1DmbbA
My favorite song? “Down by the riverside,” which celebrates the 100th Playing For Change episode!!
And you, what is your favorite song? :)
Nice job:) My favorite song is "Blizzard" by the french band, FAUVE :D
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