Corrections · 2
I corrected your sentences but then I rewrote them to make them sound better. So the first correction is to show corrections in grammar. Then second correction is to make the sentences sound better.
January 5, 2015
I got up early in the morning today like always.
Then I ate breakfast and got dressed. I headed out to work at 7:10. It would be better to say " I left for work at 7:10am.")
It would be better to say:
This morning I woke up early as always. Then I eat breakfast, got dressed, and headed out to the bus stop at 7:10.
The bus came at 7:20 and I got off the bus at 7:45. From there, I walked to work and arrived at work at exactly 8 O'clock.
It is better to say:
At 7:20 I took the ( you should write the town it took you to.) From there, I walked to work and arrived at exactly 8 O'clock.
I made coffee for myself and started working. Then it was all work and work and work until 1 PM.
At one O'clock, like always, I had an hour to rest and eat lunch.
It is better to say:
When I got work, I made coffee and started to work. Then it was all work until 1p.m., when I took my hour lunch (break) as usual.
Today wasn't a busy day but I worked on a program that I hadn't enough knowledge about it and it made me very tired.
Today was not a busy day, but I did work on a challenging program, which I did not have much knowledge about. This made me tired. I hope to slove the problem/issue tomorrow. OR (" I hope to resovle the problem/ issue tomorrow."
I hope to solve my issue tomorrow :)
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