Corrections · 26
除夕的节日
我2014年12月31日到2015年1月1日在了我爸爸妈妈的家庆祝了除夕的节日。我们中午吃了小麦粥,然后15点吃了饼干。我们晚上吃了喝了番茄的汤和,吃了比萨饼。比萨饼是很辣的了。你看看的照片。我和我爸爸和了喝了很多爱尔兰的威士忌。这是不好,我1月1日早上很生病和累了又生病又累。我今天是很好啊。我妈妈给了我一个件礼物。我现在有一个小材料的驻。在德国,驻给你运气。我现在是很高兴。2015是我的本命年!
我爸爸妈妈没不喜欢中国式的烟花爆竹。我不知道为什么。我有很多玩笑点它们放烟花放得很开心。
ATTENTION! I don't know waht a 驻 is. 驻 is not a noun, and this character means "to stand still". I think you meant 柱, that is a pillar or a stick.
除夕的节日
我2014年12月31日到2015年1月1日在了我爸爸妈妈的家庆祝除夕的节日。我们中午喝了小麦粥,然后下午三点15点吃了饼干。我们晚上喝番茄的汤和吃比萨饼。比萨饼是很辣的了。你看看我发的照片。我和我爸爸喝了很多爱尔兰的威士忌。这是不好的,我一月一日早上有些不舒服。但是我今天感觉我身体很好。我妈妈给我一个礼物。我现在有一个小猪????。在德国,猪????会给你带来运气。我现在是很高兴。2015是属于我的一年!
我爸爸妈妈不喜欢中国式的烟花爆竹(Maybe they think it's dangerous to blowing them up )。我不知道为什么。我有觉得点燃它们很好玩。NICE WORK O(∩_∩)O
New Years Eve Festival
From 31st December 2014 until 1st January 2015 I was in my parents’ home to celebrate the New Year’s party. On midday we ate semolina pudding, and then on 15 o clock we ate some cookies. On the evening we ate tomato soup and Pizza. The Pizza was very spicy. Take a look onto the picture. I and my father drank very much Irish whiskey. That is not good. On 1st January I felt very ill and tired. Today I’m great. My mother also gave me a present. I now have a small plush pig. In Germany a pig gives you luck. I am now very happy. 2015 will be my year!
My parents didn’t like the Chinese crackers. I do not know why. I had very much fun of blowing them up.
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