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Happy new year This is not new year in my country. Actually we celebrate it on spring; three months later but I'm really happy because of my friends around the world who are happy these days so happy new year everybody!

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Happy new year too :)
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Happy new year

This is not new year in my country (New year is not celebrated at this time in my country). Actually, we celebrate it on (during) spring; three months later. but I'm really happy because of my friends around the world who are happy these days are celebrating. So, (I wish a) happy new year  to everybody!

 

Great job Saleh!  I changed some of the wording to be more natural and native.  I also corrected some uses of commas.  If you would like to do a 30 minute tutoring session with me as a trial, it is only one dollar.  I look forward to meeting you!

 

Sincerely,


Sean

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