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After coming back from a year long backpacking trip in Latin America, I started to dream about having a job there. I got to speak in Spanish and I was fascinated by Latin culture and the people. At that moment I had been deeply impressed by the graduation speech by Steve Jobs at Stanford University. In his speech, he said that "having a experience is something like put a dot on the map, later we try to connect those dots and it become a line and this is how we make our story in our lives". So I started to connect my ability and my experiences to discover my future job, and thanks to the professor Ha Sang Uk, who is a lawyer in Ecuador, I knew that it is possible to work as a foreign lawyer in Latin America. or can accept the case which is something to do with South America. [I don't know what you mean by that. Please re-write.] At that moment I have decided to go to law school. As a student who will study at law school in the near future, I know it will be such a great experience to see and understand how the law in the Central America works. and I am also really looking forward to exchanging ideas about different cultures with different culture between other interns from various Latin countries.

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After coming back from the backpack trip for one year to Latin America,

After returning from a year long backpacking trip in Latin America,

I started to dream to have a job in that continent.

I began to have dreams of finding a job somewhere in the continent of Latin America. 

(no correction) I got to speak in Spanish and was fascinated by Latin culture and the people.

At that moment I had been deeply impressed by the graduation speech by Steve Jobs at Stanford University.

During that period of time I heard a graduation speech given by Steve Jobs at Stanford University that left quite an impression on me.

In his speech, he said that "having a experience is something like put a dot in the map, later we try to connect those dots and it become a line and this is how we make our story in our lives".

 In his speech he said, " Having a benficial experience is like putting a dot on a map, as we begin to connect those dots they become a line, this is how we make the storie(s) in our life.

So I started to connect my ability  abilities and experiences to find out my future job and thanks to the professor Ha Sang Uk who is a lawyer in Ecuador, I could widen my perception of view, that it is possible to work as a foreign lawyer in Latin America, or I can  accept the cases which is  have something to do with South America. At from that moment I have decided to study in law school. As a student who will study at law at school in the near future, It will be such a great experience that I will be able to can see and understand how the law in the central America is working works and I am also really looking forward to exchange sharing cultural differences between other interns from various latin countries.

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After coming back from the backpack trip for one year to a year long backpacking trip in Latin America, I started to dream about what it would be like to  have a job in  South America that continent. I got was able to speak in Spanish and was fascinated by Latin culture and the people. At that moment During my trip, I remembered a speech by the graduation speech by Steve Jobs at Stanford University which made a deep impression on me. In his speech, he said that "having a experience is something like putting a dot in the map, later we try to connect those dots and it becomes a line and this is how we make our story in our lives". So I started to connect the dots between my ability and experience to find out mold my future job. and Thanks to Professor Ha Sang Uk, who is a lawyer in Ecuador, I could widen my perception point of view to believe that it is possible to work as a foreign lawyer in Latin America or can accept the cases which is has something to do with pertaining to South America. From that moment I have decided to study in go to law school in South America. As a student who will study at law school in the near future, it will be such a great experience that I can see to learn and understand Central American law. how the law in the central America is working and I am also really looking forward to exchanging different cultural experiences between other interns from various latin american countries.