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Merry Christmas When I was young, I was so exciting that Christmas is coming. Because I believe that Santa Claus will give me a present,such as toys or bike. But now. I know it's a fairytale. Santa Claus is non-existence in the world. Reindeer hasn't red nose,too. Nevertheless,people still enjoy in the Christmas spirit. Including myself. Merry Christmas, everyone !

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Merry Christmas

When I was young, I was so excited when Christmas was coming, because I believed that Santa Claus would give me presents, such as toys or acbike. But now, I know it's a fairy tale. Santa Claus doesn't exist in the real world. Reindeer don't have red noses, either. Nevertheless, people still enjoy being in the Christmas spirit. Including myself. Merry Christmas, everyone!

 

Remember to put a space after commas and periods and exclamation marks, never before.

圣诞快乐!

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Merry Christmas

When I was young, I was so excited  that Christmas  was coming,because I believed that Santa Claus  would give me a present,such as toys or a bike. But now. I know it's a fairytale. Santa Claus is non-existent in the world. Reindeer don't have a red nose, either. Nevertheless,people still enjoy  the Christmas spirit. Including myself. Merry Christmas, everyone !

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Merry Christmas

When I was young, I always was so exciting excited that whenever Christmas is was coming, because I believed that Santa Claus will would give me a present, such as toys or a bike. But now, I know it's a fairytale. Santa Claus is non-existent in the real world. Reindeer haven't red noses, either too. (either, not too, in a negative clause) Nevertheless, many people still enjoy in the Christmas spirit, including myself. Merry Christmas, everyone !

 

 

There are many adjectives describing feelings/emotions that have two forms: -ed and -ing the -ing form describes the cause and -ed the outcome or result.  For example boring (cause) bored (result), exciting (cause) excited (result). 

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Marry X'mas

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