I can't!  Honesty was the best policy. decided to tell Scotty about the situation in an honest way. I saw how she changed the look on her face quickly under the influence of disappointment. Her demeanor changed like the uncanny weather. I braced for the worst of the storm as I was expecting that she would It seemed to me in a minute that she wanted to start to accusing me of my stupidity and inadvertence incompetence.

But instead of it she suddenly started to hoot with The unexpected happened.  She broke out in the laughter. To be Honestly, I didn’t expect such a reaction and never in a million years would I expected this sort of thing.  I didn’t know what to say or even to do. But then When her laughter she stopped, laughing and rudely she said, told me: «

"It was going to be a perfect evening... and I could make an acquaintance of have met someone. but You spoiled everything! Never to call me again»!"

and after these With those words she abruptly turned back and I was left alone there speechless. me quickly. I felt myself very foolish. The situation could have been even funny, if I wouldn’t weren't be so upset! That evening I was going trudge home very slowly. thinking about what I was reflecting on all that had happened.

As usual, When I came back got home. Good ol' Robby was there to greeted me. and I patted him. Then I started to listen Finally, I sat down listening to my favorite musical band and thought about Scottie.y, Then I heard the line from the song, " «People pretending everywhere, but tomorrow will be just another day"». I started to smile brightened up and a smile broke out.  and suddenly Then the phone suddenly rang. It must be felt it was Scottie and sure it was really her. But I didn’t answer her, the call because tomorrow is going to be just another day!

Excellent storyline!  I hope through these changes, you can pick on some of the finer points in story writing.  A perfectly grammatically correct piece does not guarantee that it is a good piece of reading. In time, you will write good if you not only increase your vocabulary by to express in a more elegant way.  I always tell other budding writers, if you are writing in a language that is not your mother tongue, try to translate it from it.  Also by reading more stories, you will become better!  I enjoyed your story very much and it was a pleasure for me to correct it as well.  Thanks for sharing.

I started to remember went through all my friends in my mind and suddenly decided to ask Scottie [Yours is a male form].  She was is the one of the women I liked most of all, to come with me to the wedding as my as "date".

In the end, I decided to call gave her call. and find out whether she’ll agree on that or not. But, actually, I felt I was the luckiest man of all the human beings person on this planet or even on others, because she said «yes» when she agreed to my invitation. I felt myself inspired and in absolutely happy, bliss! the Tomorrow’s day is going to be the greatest day ever!

On the next day,  I walked found myself up to Scotty’s staring at the front door of Scottie's place in my tuxedo. I knocked on door. and When she it was opened it, I almost gasped. I couldn’t believe my eyes! how brilliant and fantastic She looked gorgeouswas! Like a Grecian Goddess, She had her long straight blonde hair danced as she moved. [Exaggeration is always good in such description] , Her blue eyes were flashing like  blue as the deepest ocean.  sea, and it seemed to me, that And her small pink tiny lips rouged in pink like those  coming from the lips of an angel's. She was So charming and pretty in her new red short red dress that I couldn’t stop looking at her because of her beauty.

When we arrived to the wedding ceremony, almost all the guests were there. When I got took out the invitation out of from my pocket and gasped.  To my horror, I saw that  looked at it, I stood paralyzed with fear. I didn’t check the "plus one" box in the invitation.  on the reply card and it forbade me to bring someone along to the wedding! This meant that I cannot bring someone along! I felt I was ready to fall through the ground. I couldn’t even look at Scotty, I have never felt myself so much ashamed. But the time of the beginning of the ceremony was coming and I had to take something. I felt lEmbarrassment was giving me the one two punch at my stomach in the boxing ring.  I dared not look at Scottie and the ceremony was about to start!  I had to think quick!

The wedding. Could you read and tell me your opinion or correct my mistakes? Thanks in advance! :)

I woke up one sunny Saturday morning and looked up at the wall.

"I’m twenty six, I live in New York, in one of the biggest largest cities in the world. Not only this, I’m a talented and gifted architect and and yet my best friend is will marrying his girlfriend tomorrow»! Mind you, I'm all for their happiness and job but let's face it, a tinge of envy within me."  This is a soliloquy, so you need to be a bit more dramatic and a bit more informal- I thought.

When you are still single and seeing your friends start to get married, every getting hitched, each wedding invitation presents a strange moment of self-evaluation. Even though I was am an optimist, but I still as single as that lonely owl hooting out there in the tree didn’t have a girlfriend! [This is a creative essay, so add more color to it.] I didn’t don't even have a date for to attend that the wedding festive day!

That [Cannot use "that" because it imples the wedding!] Today was an ordinary Saturday. I had to do a lot of home duties, weekend chores to be done by myself. [The preceeding paragraphs sets an informal tone to the entire piece, so be more relax and less formality in your writing] because I lived alone. No luxury of a "live-in maid"! I have to cook my meals. and walk my dog. Not a very creative or interesting way to introduce Robby] However, I do have a dog, his name was is Robby and have walks with him.  I loved him very much. [Cannot use past tense here.  It implies all these are in the past and no longer true now.]  He always greetsed me by watiting at the door every time when I come home for work. and didn’t Nor does he fights over the channel changer as to which with me what show we should watch on TV.

After a while we went for [You need to learn how to break into new paragraphs for a new train of thought] As we were a taking our usual walk, and I couldn’t stop could help but to thinking about of getting a date for my best friend’s [Understood, repetition if not for emphasis is not good writing] the wedding. because [Try to use shorter sentences in this sort of storytelling, otherwise makes the story sound very pedantic and boring] I couldn’t have come there absolutely can't show up all alone nor even with can I bring Robby as my date. I don't want eyebrows raised and I definitely don't want any pity also.