いざかや
ともだちといざかやにいきます。いざかやでやきとりとさしみとてんぷらをたべました。すごいです。
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いざかや
ともだちといざかやにいきましたす。いざかやでやきとりとさしみとてんぷらをたべました。すごくおいしかったいです。
If you have gone to Izakaya already, you should put the first sentence in the past form (-mashita). Then you can state what you ate in the second sentence also using the past form (tabe mashita). If you say すごいです for the third sentence, it conveys the meaning something is wonderful or great, but it doesn't tell what is so wonderful or great. To solve this problem, I added おいしかった (delicious) after changing すごい to すごく, then the readers can sense you are talking about foods.
Overall, you've done a great job! Great!
Yuki Jane
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いざかや
ともだちといざかやにいきました。いざかやでやきとりとさしみとてんぷらをたべました。とてもおいしかったですThey were very delicious。
※"すごいですgreat" is a right Japanese. But we don't use it here.
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I can understand your sentence. But I have only one advice.
Yakitori, Sashimi and Tenpra don't seem good combination.
Such a combination of raw foods and oily foods sometimes causes stomachache!!
Take care!!
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