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日本の旅行
こんにちは、みんなさん!
3月から4月までの、3週間、で日本をに旅行します。まずは最初の4日間で東京を訪問します。
そして、名古屋と高山市と金沢市と京都と広島と大阪を見物します!
最後はまた東京にも4日間に泊まります!
日本で会うかもしれませんか? →1)日本で会いませんか? 2)日本で会うかもしれませんね。
Dimitri
Dimitri,
I think you created great sentences to tell your travel plan to Japan.
There are minor mistakes, but don't feel discouraged. They are hard ones that many foreigners feel difficult to tackle with. You just need to read and hear Japanese a lot to get accustomed with the right forms.
For the last sentence, I came up with two possible corrections. The first one means "Shall we meet in Japan?" and the second one means "We may see each other in Japan." Take the one in accordance to your original meaning.
Good job! Have a wonderful trip to Japan.
Yuki Jane
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