Schism

Another beautiful example about of how useful, and at the same time hard, learning a new language can be, it's is the case of Catherine the Great.
When she arrived to in Russia, she promised herself that she would mastered the Russian language., and since then, Every night she walked barefoot, repeating her lessons over and over again, to eventually achieve a good level of russian.
Surely, she had powerful reasons to love that land, such I as have good reasons, not to love it., because You cannot love what you don't know, but at least, to feel curiosity about it.
Maybe, due to the fact that I was born in the corner of the occidental side of the world (almost dangling of it), the stories about far away lands catch capture my attention completely. But, I'm not talking about the current world order nor the recent history. On the contrary, I'm talking about the past. As they say "all the past was better", and I'm agree with that.
In that regard I'd rather prefer listen to stories of lost worlds and almost and forgotten worlds. My imagination vibrates with stories of characters that once time breathed the same air that I breathe, and admired the same sky that I admire.
I admite that I'm not in love with the Russian history nor his it's culture nor even of his it's people men, as Catherine did. Although, I should admit that I feel a certain curiosity about the stories that that the land may maight tell me about its past :)

*If you have a good level of Spanish and you like History, I recommend this link :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWiWqycaG_o

Hi Bárbara. In this entry there is a more conversational voice in your writing, which allows for less restriction. The best English writing is typically written 'as spoken'. I have also noticed a yearning for travel? I hope you are able to visit the places you are curious about, and learn of those cultures within its lands!

Schism

Another beautiful example about of how useful and at the same time difficult hard, learning a new language can be, it's is the case of Catherine the Great.
When she arrived to in Russia, she promised herself that she would mastered the Russian language, and since then, every night she walked barefoot repeating her lessons over and over again, until she to eventually achieved a good level of russian.
Surely she had powerful reasons to love that country land, such just like I have good reasons, not to love it, because you cannot love what you don't know, but at least, to you feel curiosity about it.
Maybe due to the fact that I was born in the corner of the occidental side of the world (almost dangling off of it) the stories about far away lands catch my attention completely. But, I'm not talking about the current world order nor the recent history. On the contrary, I'm talking about the past. As they say "all the past was better" (maybe: "everything was better in the past), and I'm agree with that.
In that regard I'd rather prefer listen to stories of lost worlds lost and almost forgotten. My imagination vibrates with stories of characters that once time (either: "once" OR: "one time") breathed the same air that I breathe and admired the same sky that I admire.
I admite that I'm not in love with the Russian history nor his its culture nor even of his its men as Catherine did was. Although, I should admit that I feel certain curiosity about the stories that that land maight tell me about its past :)

*If you have a good level of Spanish and you like History, I recommend this link :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWiWqycaG_o

Suggestions for words that better fit the tone are in blue and errors in red. Overall a very nice and poetic text however :)

Schism

Catherine the Great is another beautiful example of how useful and at the same time hard, learning a new language can be.  
When she arrived in Russia, she promised herself that she would mastered the Russian language, and since then, every night she walked barefoot repeating her lessons over and over again, to eventually achieve a good level of Russian.
Surely, she had powerful reasons to love the land, such as I have good reasons. not to love it, because. You cannot love what you don't know, but you can to have curiosity about it.
Maybe due to the fact that I was born in the corner of an occidental side of the world (almost dangling off it). The stories about far away lands catch my attention completely. But, I'm not talking about the current world order, nor the recent history. On the contrary, I'm talking about the past. As they say, "all the past was better", and I'm agree with that.
In that regard, I'd rather prefer listening to stories of lost worlds and almost forgetting them. My imagination vibrates with stories of characters that once upon a time breathed the same air that I breathe. and Admired the same sky that I admire.
I admite that I'm not in love with the Russian history, nor it's culture, not even the men Catherine talked about. Although, I should admit that I feel a certain curiosity about the stories that the land might tells, about it's past. :)

*If you have a good level of Spanish and you like History, I recommend this link :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWiWqycaG_o